Erikk (2K) - Workshop Tests

[tk421]

Here are some first attempts at Peepers and Stuey. I'm not quite sure why they don't look right to me. Anyone have any suggestions before I tackle these again?

Thanks all!

2K


My first attempt at "Stuey the Pig"

http://www.thunderlightstudios.com/bluth/2k-stuey-first-attempt.jpg

My first attempt at "Peepers".

http://www.thunderlightstudios.com/bluth/2k-peepers-first-attempt.jpg

[Gabriel-Carson]

peepers looks good. I think you may be making Stuey's legs a bit to short in front view. Also in front view you are sliming his cheeks a bit to much in the first drawing. In the second drawing your loosing his head structure (easy to do, I goof on stucture all the time).


my 2 cents

[ericaanimation]

Peepers looks pretty good but Stuey's proportion see a little off. My suggestion is just keep practicing.

Erica

[Rodney]

You are off to a great start 2K!

Here's a note that may not really apply to these early drawings:
It'll be good to get into the habit of numbering your images.
That habit will pay off for you later as you post images for Don to critique.
This'll also give everyone a number to reference if they want to talk about a particular image.
(I think I'm suggesting this to you so that I will remember!)

[tk421]

You are off to a great start 2K!

Here's a note that may not really apply to these early drawings:
It'll be good to get into the habit of numbering your images.
That habit will pay off for you later as you post images for Don to critique.
This'll also give everyone a number to reference if they want to talk about a particular image.
(I think I'm suggesting this to you so that I will remember!)

Thanks Rodney. Good point!

[samuelvictorjones]

2k, I like your drawings. Peepers is really cute!

I just checked out your pencil test, really nice job on the feet & legs, I think you got them spot on. His head appears to do a slight double nod on the lower parts, and the movement of the arms looks slightly angular in some frames giving a karate chop edge. These are only minor points to improve though, I think you did a good job. The actual overall impression is walking, and as I said - I'm very admiring of the feet and legs, really drawn very well. :)

[lavallelee]

Good pencil test, can't wait to see what Don has to say about all our hard work!

[Don Bluth]

Here are some first attempts at Peepers and Stuey. I'm not quite sure why they don't look right to me. Anyone have any suggestions before I tackle these again?

Thanks all!

2K


My first attempt at "Stuey the Pig"

http://www.thunderlightstudios.com/bluth/2k-stuey-first-attempt.jpg

My first attempt at "Peepers".

http://www.thunderlightstudios.com/bluth/2k-peepers-first-attempt.jpg

Hi Erikk,

I hadn't seen you first drawings when we had the workshop last Sat. I must say they are quite impressive, particularly the sketch of Peepers. I an anxious to see your ruff test next Sat. Good show.

Don