JenI's random toons

[JenI]

http://www.donbluthanimation.com/forum/picture.php?albumid=4&pictureid=9
The start to an Easter comic I'm working on. Just practicing expressions and continuity. :P LOL! I think it works okay, but I dont like the top right one. :D
http://www.donbluthanimation.com/forum/picture.php?albumid=4&pictureid=33
I was trying my hand at motion. Still need some work. But this is what happens when the Marine Hymn pops on while you're sketching. XD
http://www.donbluthanimation.com/forum/picture.php?albumid=4&pictureid=14
A little something I whipped up for my dad. He loves martial arts and tigers. Which is why he loves Kung Fu Panda. So I attempted at making a KP style tiger for him. XD Still having trouble with motion in my pictures.

Any thoughts?

[dmgctrl]

Love the kung fu tiger. Keep them coming!

[JenI]

Love the kung fu tiger. Keep them coming!
Thanks I was beginning to think I was an out-cast. ROFL! J/K 8D

[fanimation]

I like the tiger also and I like your submission to the rhino competition, Very nice work!

John

[dmgctrl]

Thanks I was beginning to think I was an out-cast. ROFL! J/K 8D

Nah, we don't have any outcasts here. Its only been 3 weeks!

[JenI]

Nah, we don't have any outcasts here. Its only been 3 weeks!:D:D

Yeah I was just kidding. XD LOL! I'll more of a lurker anyways since class has started again. XD

[JenI]

I like the tiger also and I like your submission to the rhino competition, Very nice work!

John

Thanks. I was surprised at how hard rhinos are to draw. XD Whats worse for me, is drawing a "mean" looking character. No matter how mean it needs to look, it still somehow looks cute when I draw it. XD I think its because I'm a naturally happy go lucky person. :D That aspect always seems to come out. >.< LOL!

[jeremyhopkins]

Yeah I really like the tiger picture too and I like how you drew a person with different expressions in your comic. Actually for the tiger, I don't really have a problem with the motion because you have some nice rhythm and flow. Your silhouette might be a bit complicated so maybe that's causing your eye to draw away from the main action. Maybe choosing a slightly different staging would help clean things up for you.. though this
http://mittkd.org/images/gb-sidekick.jpg
is taekwondo, not kung fu... but I hope it helps clarify my suggestion. I like your rhino! Its a very cute bully :)

[JenI]

Yeah I really like the tiger picture too and I like how you drew a person with different expressions in your comic. Actually for the tiger, I don't really have a problem with the motion because you have some nice rhythm and flow. Your silhouette might be a bit complicated so maybe that's causing your eye to draw away from the main action. Maybe choosing a slightly different staging would help clean things up for you.. though this
is taekwondo, not kung fu... but I hope it helps clarify my suggestion. I like your rhino! Its a very cute bully :)

Hmm...Okay I think I see what you're saying. :) So perhaps a different approach might have worked better? i.e. different angle?

[annelp18]

i love the kung fu tiger pics also. when i watch kung fu panda with my older sister, i felt really bad for the tiger not joining the furious five team. that he was soon replaced by tigress.:(:cool: